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Lost....
Lost in the nothing
the darkness, the never ending eternity,
keep close enough to feel
but far enough only to see
to change, would be a crime
to change, would be you,
A rock under the sand
found only to tease life,
to die, disappear
this would be a privilage
the beginning, the end,
Found....
©2004-2009 ~shredu2
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this is the original of which i copied outta me boy's book, whilst i was sposed 2 b doing math C. (sorry Mideg, i got SOME done!). He wrote it down, he said he heard it somewhere and remembered bits and this is what he got. i copied it on his condition that i re-wrote it myself. this is the original, i wrote 2 others versions. take a peak at them too.

if u know where this has possibly come from please let me know! we'd (me n J) like to know where it from.....

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ooooo i love this. the best thing about it is that you dont know where it came from. that adds mystery and makes it fascinating. it's that wierd,excited, cool feeling you get inside. call me a nerd, but i get that feeling hen i'm in the library walking down an aisle with the smell of old books fresh in my nostrils. all those stories just waiting to be found. hehe i went to the library today. (oh yeah i'm a nerd.)

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Razors pain you;
Rivers are damp;
Acids stain you;
And drugs can cause cramp.
Guns aren't lawful;
Nooses give;
Gas smells awful;
You might as well live.
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ur a nerd? then im one too! i love the smell of books. it is exciting walking amongst them thinking if u shud read them or not..... thanx. i like it too.!
:D

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:D *ShReD* :D

If I were you and you were me, would I see you as you see me????

"What would be the point of wings if you couldn't feel the wind on your face?"
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hey tbone,
i love this. tis beautiful. plus! i feel inspired, finally. had writers block for a while, but i wrote sommat in response to this. check it out. :)
lotsa loven for ma sissabum!!!
jor

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check out my work!! or the penguins will eat you! no seriously, they will.


i could tell you that i am a nympho, an alcoholic, a bitch, lazy, a glutton, quirky, a blasphemer, a deviant, obscene, proud fornicator, foul mouthed, a cunt, obsessive compul
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okay... thanx. im glad ur writting again! :clap:

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:D *ShReD* :D

If I were you and you were me, would I see you as you see me????

"What would be the point of wings if you couldn't feel the wind on your face?"

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